Now go through again and pull out supporting ideas for each key point. It's always better to have too many sources than too few.
I will be talking more about these things in my paper.
In the introduction above, the opening line does not serve to grab the reader’s attention.
Instead, it is a statement of an obvious and mundane fact. A more effective attention grabber may point out a specific, and perhaps surprising, instance when adults use math in their daily lives, in order to show the reader why this is such as important topic to consider.
Next the writer “announces” her topic by stating, “The topic I have chosen to write about…” Although it is necessary to introduce your specific topic, you want to avoid making generic announcements that reference your assignment.
In an essay, the introduction, which can be one or two paragraphs, introduces the topic.
There are three parts to an introduction: the opening statement, the supporting sentences, and the introductory topic sentence.
This technique is not as sophisticated and may distract the reader from your larger purpose for writing the essay.
Instead, you might try to make the reader see why this is such an important topic to discuss.
The first paragraph might consist of just the attention grabber and some narrative about the problem.
Then you might have one or more paragraphs that provide background on the main topics of the paper and present the overall argument, concluding with your thesis statement.